Sometimes you are a smile on my face
Twinkle in my eyes
U are a wish
When I close my eyes
You are tears in my eyes
When my heart is not light
You are the one in my arms
When I am alone
You are the silence of my heart
When the words I speak are left unheard
You are my reason to remain
You are my craziness
You are my sweetest dream
When I wake up smiling
You are in my lies
When people ask why I smile
You are my shadow
When I walk the streets alone
Sometimes love
Sometimes Life
U are with me every time
17 comments:
u got rabies called "LOVE"
nice one..
i mst say really nice thoughts
this has made me smile
pehli baar teri koi poem samaj aayi hai
he he
bt seriously really nice:)
thats a lovely post with simple spicy touch
keep up the flame burning ;P
gud very gud
aapne gfrnd ko sunaunga or bolunga maine likha hai :D
poem is really nice
but could u let me know about whom u r talking
a nice love poem. must say u voiced every heart in love. u surely r in love. may His blessings touch your feelings for each other.
affection
ahhh... the days of love... that peom 'bout sums it all up...
After 17 years of marraige, it is about time for us to get back to that kind of love... might have to start working on that... he he.. KC
very nice mein tujhe iska hindi version doongi jo meine mayank ko di thi.i have no words to say something.
great.........................
sorry... thoda late ho gayi...
ahhh...wel...wat shud one comment wen one knos all...
bt yeah it surely is wonderful...fills one's heart wid luv n all those cuchy-coo feelings.
nice n touchy.
Thanks for coming by my blog. Having a couple of rough days, but I am back on track I think. Takes a bit of that to get it together... KC
Really superb namratha,nice thoughts
to nice people by a very very nice person(namratha)
I think you fell love am i right?
good!!!!!!
i must say it is really nice....but i agree with chavi that its first time that i m able to understand ur poem
nice poem
keep it up.......
Very nice thought i liked this alot very romantic & heart touching...... :)
such a thought...ur in Love dear....
true feelings of heart!!!!!!!!
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